The Silent Aviator

^8/10- You've had that one for quite some time, but it still looks awesome-ish.

I agree. When teachers impose strict guidelines and parameters for your writing, everything gets screwy. Writers block sucks. For every week I write well, I have quite a few more ...

Jarhead is a very good book.[ I reccomend it to anybody who reads nonfiction] The movie recently came out, as you probably know. Here's some other books/movies I can think ...

earnings

Yeah, the sentences are like that for about the first fourth of the work or so, and then the wordi-ness tapers off pretty quickly. But, that's only my personal opinion.

Very good! I'm no grammar expert, but I personaly think that some of the sentences are a bit wordy and have a bit much in terms of descriptions. Nonetheless, I ...

Thank you all for the advice so far. I'll implement it in the next helo. (should I ever finish the homework I'm "working" on)

Welcome to the YWS, Ladyequine! :) Hope you like it here. As Waffles said, post and critique often. Enjoy!

Both, 8.5/10 Very true in both cases.

Hello! Welcome to YWS! You'll enjoy it here...

France with nukes and the desire to use them...scary. I'm serious. I wonder what size of terror attack would motivate France. A hotel bombing? A 9/11 scale event?

Very good!! Harsh but true portrayal of American culture.

8/10. Funny *sarcasticly* Well, there goes 15 points. :evil:

I've decided to draw something for a change. I drew this Bell UH-1 a few nights ago during my period of post-homework boredom. I've got a whole lot of other ...

^Who is "Connor"? Sorry, 4/10